Cronos Crept

Time

The truth is

Horrible

That we all die

Alone

 

Try

To deny it

Inevitably you’ll be

Dying

To try it

 

The truth is

It is

Later

Than you think

Reviews

[Harmonica winds]

so truthful and intriguing, something to really ponder on as well. Nicely said.

[screamin'ian]

Andrea, thank you for your thoughts. It is as it is. There is no more; no more needs to be said. The beauty and power of it is in it's simplicity and straightforwardness. The fun of it is in my playful use of simple words and phrases. Tell you what, you edit it and show me what you think would make it "better," ok? :-)

[Andrea Vargas]

This is interesting... I think it needs more detail... you make points but i dont think the reader canh fully grasp your meaning with those words.. Use imagery...
good concept though (: