Don't Kid Yourself, Kid

Don't Kid Yourself, Kid

A Poem by screamin'ian
"

Summing it up

"
In the final
Analysis
It was fun
While it lasted
Take my Own 
Advice
Forget ifs 
Ands or whys

Since it's the lies
That have left me
Confused as 
To purpose
I believe
I will leave Them
On purpose behind

Don't kid yourself, kid

No thought of me
Or my well-being
Could be enough
Could be so compelling
To lie bare-faced
To lie in the gutter
Just to have
Your back
Turned
To me

It was easy
To exit
An easy way
At least
Christ
Got his kiss
No such dignity
Exists
For me

© 2011 screamin'ian


Author's Note

screamin'ian
Take it for what it is

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I really like your work. Your words are so well placed, have big impact. Love "for ifs, ands or whys." Very clever.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I take it as sorrow and regret, a yearning that goes unsaited due to lack of diving in, letting yourself be vulnerable instead of turning your back in fear of a greater pain.... Beautiful and honest write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


deep and profound. Like this

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This is great poem, I like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 24, 2011
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