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A Poem by screamin'ian
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Powerless
To undo
Past time
Passed time
Preys with ease
On and on
Uneasy memory

Hard beyond
All 
Hardness proposed
Mastery of Nature
Naturally, I plead
Time
And time again

Step forward
That first step
Fall into
That groove
Retrace
That route
Transcend

Endless 
Circles betray
Tendency 
Toward completion



© 2011 screamin'ian


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Yes, circular logic; circular arguments; Talking in circles...
Very frustrating.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yes! The circles! See!!!! They frustrate don't they. Another great poem!
My favorite line...
"Circles betray"

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vivid detail and creative. Enjoyed reading this

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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enjoyed this, your imagery is delightful to visualise

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice Ian. Very creative in the format and always a great write! Loved the word choice and flow!! Thanks for the post!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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