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A Poem by screamin'ian
Word-play
Powerless
To undo
Past time
Passed time
Preys with ease
On and on
Uneasy memory
Hard beyond
All
Hardness proposed
Mastery of Nature
Naturally, I plead
Time
And time again
Step forward
That first step
Fall into
That groove
Retrace
That route
Transcend
Endless
Circles betray
Tendency
Toward completion
© 2011 screamin'ian
Author's Note
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Enjoy
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Reviews
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Yes, circular logic; circular arguments; Talking in circles...
Very frustrating.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Yes! The circles! See!!!! They frustrate don't they. Another great poem!
My favorite line...
"Circles betray"
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Vivid detail and creative. Enjoyed reading this
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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enjoyed this, your imagery is delightful to visualise
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Very nice Ian. Very creative in the format and always a great write! Loved the word choice and flow!! Thanks for the post!
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on November 6, 2011
Last Updated on November 6, 2011
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