So Sure

Autobiographical snapshot with subjective and objective observations.

I'm sure
You can imagine
The pain I feel

So hard
Too hard
To pretend
It's not real

It was implicit in the bargain
I'd see the pieces fall in place


an unspoken broken deal

My home was broken
It was an inside job
Sleep with the enemy, hell
She bore my child

Chin skin flapped up
Kissing my cheek
I lay beside
The flaming wreck

Was yesterday?
Earlier?
An hour ago, a million years

Visage of Athena
Dressed as naughty nurse
Hypodermic in her hand
Chock fulla wisdom
She jabbed it in
Broke it off in my head

Skanky, pimpled, junky w***e
You are my Guardian Angel
I am your one true love
Under the boardwalk
On a rainy day
No one else
Would dare to play

Like water, the universal solvent, emotion rises to meet it's own level

Author's Note

Njoy

Reviews

[TawnyBlueStar]

absolutely love it :)
the last few stanzas are amazing :D with the mixture of love and hate
'You are my Guardian Angel
I am your one true love'
love this

[Little Birdie]

"Skanky, pimpled, junky w***e
You are my Guardian Angel
I am your one true love
Under the boardwalk
On a rainy day
No one else
Would dare to play

Like water, the universal solvent, emotion rises to meet it's own level "

This is beautiful. I don't know what more to say but you describe things so common so perfectly, I can't even describe. I like the love/hate relationship and the beautiful and stunning comparation of water with emotions. Lovely. I really adore your poetry.