Liebling

In years gone by, we'd hold hands and fly
Nothing but everything before us
What could have been
Should have been
But it seems will never be
Who can be blamed for such mistakes
Something so complicated
Can only belong to both of us
Our only child: regret
So many things said, so much left to say
Times both good and bad
Times beautiful or sad
All tainted by an ignorant past

Author's Note

Had to atleast attempt to get this out into words. Not sure if you could call it a poem. Not sure if it could be lyrics either. Definitely a rough draft of what ever it is. Don't know anything about "proper" formatting so I didn't even try to style it that way.

Reviews

[Devious13]

this piece is so amazing , you did amazing work if you are the first time writer as you say , its real its raw its what i was drawn to i know this pain all to well its like you were the person that i feel this way about and you took me through the whole relationship in a mere few secs , and thats how i want my readers to feel when they read the stuff i share no damn format or spell check just the moment that i feel the exact emotion i want them to feeel as they read ! and this was so awesome , love it want to read more you did that @!

[Scplsd]

Wow, thanks. I feel like it's a little clunky in some places. Not quite what I was trying to say exactly. But I'm glad someone liked it. I've never wrote poetry before so this was a bit of an experiment. I've never really shown much of what I write but I'll upload more as it comes.

[Devious13]

your welcome ! upload let me know i woould love to read and review and never second guess your talent believe in yourself silly or you wont feel that you are deserving of aything but here and if you need a review or anything to help im here you let me e know