Idea

So I've got this idea...

I've got this idea
for a poem
about a girl
who is lonely
and only I
have the strength
to help her,
and we love being together
despite our differences,
despite our tempers,
despite desire to see others,
despite our fear of being open and honest.
We share everything,
we stay together,
we stay happy,
and in all the world,
even when we have nothing else,
we have each other.
I've got this idea
for a poem
about a girl who saves me,
I've got this idea
for a poem
I can't bring myself to write.

Reviews

[Jon]

Your idea ended up being a great peom!:D Good job.

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

This piece is unique in meaning Scott. It is different and welcoming. Your three lines at the end has done justice to this piece. Well delivered!