A Little More Lonely

A Little More Lonely

A Poem by Scott A. Williams
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Just a quick piece.

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I could stand to be
a little more lonely,
spend a few more nights
up late
with nobody to talk to
but me.
I do my best work
when nothing good
is on TV.

© 2010 Scott A. Williams


Author's Note

Scott A. Williams
I may expand this sometime.

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these two statements felt disconnected. I would suggest adding something in the middle to tie them together. i would keep it short, though, as that tends to be my M.O.

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Posted 14 Years Ago


Short, but it has character.
I like it :). Nice write.

-Elissa :D

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0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Scott A. Williams
Scott A. Williams

GTA, Canada



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Born in Toronto. Raised in the suburbs. Schooled in journalism. Lookin' for meaning in an uncertain world. I spend a lot of time writing for a girl whom I'm not sure exists, but I thought she wasn.. more..

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