smoke screen

smoke screen

A Poem by scott 37
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written for "cigarette & perfume" competition. Then sumitted late.

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Such 

Sweet

Smelling

Smoke

 

Raising

From

 

Luscious

Alluring

Lickable

Lips

 

Past

Eyes

 

That

Tempt

Tantalise

Tease

 

Tentatively

Meet

 

Connect

Encourage

Chastise

Challenge

 

Until

Laughter

 

Bursts

Bellows

Bewitches

Befriends

 

My dear sweet rose

Pass it on

© 2010 scott 37


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This was a very intriguing sort of piece. Nicely written. Perfect metaphors very seductive.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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scott 37
scott 37

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