Simplistic

simplistic emotions will sway the hearts oceans,

leaving behind it the sands of devotion.

Caressing its notion can only bring sweet potions.

Love is meant to be magic, Like a lifetime once past it.

love is not meant to mean anything for once you see past it,

Love will show you that which is truly fantastic

Reviews

[n]

"Love is meant to be magic, Like a lifetime once past it."
^probably my favorite line^

"simplistic emotions will sway the hearts oceans,
leaving behind it the sands of devotion."
^written very good^

Great job.

[Avery James]

"Simplistic emotions will sway the heart's oceans."

Perfect.