Release

There is no release from the pain that's subsided,

And in darkness alone will the light be confided.

Pictures may age, and love may yet fade.

But the life that i love grows strong with the day.

Eddies in time may give new light to the morning.

And still yet I find this life yet adorning.

There's light on our paths that grow dim with our passing,

Like moths drawn to light like life light that's amassing.

The days will come to pass and leave like a lapsing.

But our love for each other will be everlasting.

Author's Note

just looking for some feedback

Reviews

[gravitylava]

I like it =) but you should put in poem form, like this
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That way it's easier to read.
Otherwise, I like the meaning.
nice.
-michelle