Mothers Tears

Crying with sorrow for your tears become wind,

I was your pillar, your strength, your blood born of kin.

Your children, Your worry, Your love lost in time.

Our life is your legacy, Your words will become mine.

Your Love cant be lost in time or in death.

A mothers tears will always be known as her test.

Your tears cannot comfort the pain you've put aside,

It can only hurt you, for lies you've lived and died.

Reviews

[Brandon Lee Burton]

very well written, its hard to write a rhyming poe that creates a vivid picture without using cheesy or cliche lines. i like it :) keep it up

[Avery James]

Oh my God! How are people not blowing you up with comments! You are absolutely amazing! I've only read two of them, but you flow so well. You use slant rhyme and internal rhyme. You diction is impeccable. Such a good read, such a good poem, and such a good writer! Keep it up! You'll know that I'm reading you at least. :)