Unreal Fear

Twinkling stars brighten the night

Walking quickly

Faster, Fright

Conscious feeling, follower

Maybe, or not

So unsure

Trembling nerves, feet congeal

Situation

So unreal

Head controls the depths of heart

Clutching phone

Turn and dart

Fear is all in the head

Clattering teeth

Body is led

Fighting urge to turn around

Just keep going

Hear a sound

Need to know, assurance wins

Turn around

To face the wind

 

~st

Reviews

[Jessica Harmony]

that's really good i like it. :)

[For my life I write]

wow, i really like the flow and how it all makes sense and i totally get that feeling of thinking someone is following you... creepy. especially where we live...

[A.Lee]

I love this. I definitely know the feeling. You got that emotion across very well. Just keep going, just keep going. Then you finally turn around and there's nothing. Just the wind. Well written.

[Awdures]

I enjoyed the urgency in this poem, the rhythm makes it so. Sometimes all you can do is keep going. Great words.