Constructive Criticism

To make a real good poem

You need a little luck

But I have to tell you

That your spelling really sucks

 

If I never criticize

You will never know

That you have no vocabulary

And your concept doesn’t flow

 

Sometimes your sentences

Really do not rhyme

Sometimes your poems are too long

And to read them there’s no time

 

Don’t write poems

When you are too lazy

Because when I read it

It sounds completely crazy

 

If you want to say something

Don’t think it’s obvious

We can’t see what you tried to mean

We are not prophets

 

Sometimes you make no sense

Or your poem is full of lies

Before you give your poem out

Make sure you revise!

 

--ST

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[For my life I write]

constructive criticism... ha. very cute