my life

my life

A Poem by ritchie carter
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these are the words to my song that ive got on you tube it explains a little about me and what ive been through

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yo listen up coz im gonna tell you a storey
its about my life it aint no jackanory
i was born un march of 1986
inocent and pure like all other kids
but there was a difference between me and them
i found out my mother didnt want to be my friend
so the beating started i was black and blue
what was i supposed to do i was only 2
im all grown up now and all i can see
on looking back i dont know why oh why it happend to me
ill tell you one thing though this i regret ever getting on to a drug called fete
cocain, smack, ketamine booze try any of these and then youll loss
your dignety your self respect youll loss your purpose in life.
youll loss your keys your cars your kids and your wife
now is it worth it just believe you me
drugs will mess your life up just you wait and see
i dont mean to preach no im not on your case
blowing money on drugs is such a wast
said budda budda bad bo
budda buadda bad boy
thinking your though walking round with your head in the clouds
and your taking stuff
said budda budda bad boy thinking your cleaver
taking drugs just because your under the weather
but no your troubles they wont go away
they just gonna get worse diggy day by day
so just you listen to my rhyme and to what i say
coz i went through it yeah back in the day
when i was young and stupid i was full of pride
trying to find why i was hurting in side
that is why i am here to say and to tell ya about drugs coz its a muggs game
mugs game yeah thats right
paranoya keeping you awake at night
the voices and the faces that i see are all in my head
but they seem reall to me
is it worth it is this what i should take
gotta pull myself to gether for goodness sake!!!!!

© 2013 ritchie carter


Author's Note

ritchie carter
this is about my life and how drugs drink and the illnesses they cause can get out of controle you can see the full vidio on you tube by typing in" richie& johnnymix2"

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i supose its ok to the music it fit i mean but i feel like a hipercrit in a way because ive not listened to my own words and advise so maybe i shoud be ashamed but the thing is that we all make mistakes its just weather we learn from them. me ive made the mistakes learned and then for some reason or another ive made them again it just beggs the question"is there ever a point where you say stop and pack up trying". the thing that keeps me plodding on is hope and theres always hope no matter how bad and dark things get youve just got to find that little something to hope for and that my friends is the only reason im still hear. hope!!!!!!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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i supose its ok to the music it fit i mean but i feel like a hipercrit in a way because ive not listened to my own words and advise so maybe i shoud be ashamed but the thing is that we all make mistakes its just weather we learn from them. me ive made the mistakes learned and then for some reason or another ive made them again it just beggs the question"is there ever a point where you say stop and pack up trying". the thing that keeps me plodding on is hope and theres always hope no matter how bad and dark things get youve just got to find that little something to hope for and that my friends is the only reason im still hear. hope!!!!!!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its good when you hear me rapping it along to the muic which the mix is by my dj friend whiich is cool to see what he does and its got fantastic background pictures aswell so check it out on youtube at" richie& johnnymix2"


Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on February 9, 2013
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ritchie carter
ritchie carter

sheffeild, rotherham, United Kingdom



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im an mc or a rapper if you like and ive jouned up to see how it could improve my songs and poetry and im looking forward to doing it aswell coz ive aready been introduced to some fabulas work im just.. more..

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