Pain is like Darkness Corrupting People's Mind

I wrote this before a lot of bad stuff happened... truthfully it's made me cry

I just wish there was a way
To make everything be okay
It's not possible I know
But I'm tired of all this woe
Sorrow is getting to me
People don't see
I care
Too much
And it hurts me more
Another giver I am I guess
Holding these memory
But instead the pain
Taking it in
Bit by bit
til theres someone else like me
I'm going insane
Nothing but this pain
All around the people I know
Like darkness trying to corrupt their mind
HELP ME
they scream with their imaginary voice
I will
Just tell me how

Reviews

[SilentDreamer]

This is really sad but I can relate. The flow could be a little bit better but I like it. Great job. :) Keep writing!