Secret

 

 

 

We're just friends

Him and I

Forever more

Till I die

 

There's one thing

He doesn't know

That I'll love him

As we grow

 

Day by day

Night by night

When I think about him

My heart takes flight

 

I love his eyes

I love his hair

Everything about him

Would make us a wonderful pair

 

I wish I could tell him

That I love him so

But the fear that he'll hate me

Will never go

 

We promised we were only friends

And I must keep it

This wonderful love

Must always be secret

Reviews

[Yuko]

Very sweet and very honest. Great job! :)

[Str8jacket]

I understand this so much, it's a really sweet, good poem. It's simple yet painfully honest.

[darkgurl]

Ah! this is ever so sweet and so beautiful as well as honest, This is a very well written write.

[Janice Ann]

How sweet. I have a simuliar poem like this. I like this because it is real and honest, and hurtful. I know love is the hardest secret to keep! Fantastic read and write! Great job I look forward to reading more of your work!

Thanks for sharing!
Janiceann