Maybe

song

That fight was hell.
I was so glad.
When you walked out the door.
But slowly things got cold.
And I think I died.
Inside.

When you're gone.
And all the tears have fallen from my eyes.
That's when I will see.
How much you mean to me.
And what I truly need.
Just take me in your arms.
Hold you close to me.
And then we'll see.
Maybe.
Baby.
Maybe.
Maybe then we'll see.
How much we need to be.
And maybe then we'll cry.
But then we remember we died.
And the dead don't cry.
We can try to live again.
Maybe.
Baby.
Maybe.
Maybe.
Oh, maybe we can live.
Because right now.
I see.
You're my everything.
I feel like I'm alive.
I feel like I could cry.

Look into my eyes.
Glistening, shivering fear.
I'm shedding a tear.
I love you.

Please stay.
Because when you're gone.
And all the tears have fallen from my eyes.
That's when I will see.
What we need to be.
Don't leave me, baby.
I know that I haven't been the best.
But love's a test.
And Maybe.
Baby.
Maybe.
Maybe we can learn to live as one.

When you're gone.
And all the tears have fallen from my eyes.
That's when I will see.
What we need to be.
And what I truly need.
What you mean to me.
You're my everything.

Reviews

[Lighthouse Call]

Hello! I like this write. You have a very good potential in writing songs. I hope you play an instrument along. This song needs a little more touch. I couldn't figure out the story behind it.. "when you're gone" is the only line that shows someone left.. shows a story. Also, for your next write, try to use more metaphors, and keep lines equal in words as much as possible. I know in songs you can't always do that. I'm looking forward to read your next song. I like this one, and you're getting a good rating for it. I suggest you read some lyrics like "broken - lifehouse" or "everything - lifehouse"
They should inspire your writing scenes. =)

Luke.