Lover's Lament

Vamp romance and tragedy ;)

I fell away

Into the night

Lost my soul

Which held my light

 

And when I fell

I died inside

Now stuck in an eternal Hell

I reside

 

I still remember my first kill

The brutality of it

Remembrance still gives me a chill

 

The Sun is a candle

Blown out for me long ago

Now my way is lit

By the moon's dim glow

 

And all of this

Because of that midnight kiss

That, my last moment of bliss

 

I've gone on so long

Thinking I was with you

While the whole time I was all alone

 

So good night

Or good morning I should say

Because my dark is your light

And your night is my day

Author's Note

Vampyric

Reviews

[Michelle Long]

Very well-crafted, indeed.
It sends an eerie tale through the reader's mind.
"The Sun is a candle
Blown out for me long ago
Now my way is lit
By the moon's dim glow"
This is a part I liked; vampyric, yes, but also giving a glimpse of a different form,
almost like werewovles.

[Wildecat]

This is a well crafted poem, a pleasure to read your poetry.

[Deckster30]

Holy crap that is really good

[Leo Gems]

So good night

Or good morning I should say

Because my dark is your light

And your night is my day

A nice vampire tale.. makes you want to think.. the next time you go for that late night kiss.. :)
I love the stanza above.. it reflects the life of a lonesome vampire..