Writer's Wednesday 35: SuperstitionA Story by Sarah J DhueOn my blog, I do an 'event' called Writer Wednesdays. I post a prompt and others(including me) write something based on that prompt. For my superstition, I did the Curse of the Opal Stone. “Oh you don’t want that one, Miss,” the
pawn shop owner said as Jessica looked down at the opal necklace in the jewelry
display case, “it’s cursed.” Jessica laughed. “Surely you don’t believe that.” The shop owner just stared at her. “But it’s such a lovely necklace… curse
smurse, how much?” She pulled out her
wallet and checkbook, looking at the owner expectantly. “I, uh…”
The shop owner’s voice trailed off.
He was dealing with a dilemma - the necklace was valuable, he could easily
squeeze a few hundred out of the gal for it.
On the other hand, he didn’t want any part in selling it to her. The way he had even come to own it was…
questionable, to say the least, and he did not want to have her misfortune
tracked back to him. “Just take it.” “Take it?
But I couldn’t do that, it must be worth a pretty penny.” “I don’t want no part in selling it. I don’t want blood on my hands… dirty money,
as they say.” Jessica slowly put her methods of payment
back in her purse. “Well… if you insist…” “Are you sure you want it?” “Yes.” “Here.”
The shop owner placed the necklace on top of the glass display case in
disgust. “Take it and go. I’ll have nothing more to do with it.” And with that, Jessica left the shop with her
beautiful new ‘purchase.’ The opal was
large and pale blue, set in copper that looked like aged brass on an equally
color chain. When the light hit it, fractals
of green, pale orange, and lavender were visible within the blue. “Cursed
my foot,” Jessica thought to herself as she fastened the necklace around
her neck. It was hefty and rested
heavily on her chest. She instantly
loved the way it felt. As Jessica headed for the subway station,
she suddenly decided that may not be the best idea. Given how gaudy the necklace was and that it
was getting late, she was afraid she might get mugged and robbed if the wrong thug
took a liking to her brooch; the night crowd on the subway was a shady lot. She instead turned and headed for Main Street,
where she would hail a cab. As she passed a back alley not but a few
blocks from the pawn shop, a man stepped out from the shadows. He smelled strongly of cigarettes. “Well, well, what do we have here? A pretty young miss all alone on this brisk
night. Come here, darling, let me hold
you close and keep you warm.” “Oh, no sir. I am in a bit of a rush.” “Maybe dropping some weight would help you
get where you’re going faster.” “I beg your pardon?” Jessica kept walking, but so did the man. “That necklace you’re wearing looks mighty
heavy. Maybe it’s slowing you down from
getting where you’re going to.” “Oh no, that’s silly, I just-” But the man grabbed her and shoved her up
against the brick wall of an apartment building, his fingers twisted in her blouse
collar to form an unescapable gripping fist.
His face was so close to hers that the smell of cigarettes blocked out
most of her other senses. She took in air to scream for help, but felt a thin line of cold
metal press up against her throat. She
proceeded to scream, but all that managed to escape was a startled gurgle as
the man wedged the knife deep into her throat.
She felt hot thick blood run down her neck and chest, heard it dripping
onto the sidewalk. Saw the crimson spray
across the man’s grimacing face. Tasted
copper in her mouth as it filled with her own blood, and she struggled to
breathe, but simply choked on the hot liquid - not that her mouth and lungs
were connected anymore, given her severed windpipe. Only the smell of cigarettes filled her nostrils and the taste
of copper filled her mouth. Keeping the
blade wedged in her throat, quite possibly pressed all the way back against her
spine, Jessica felt him release her blouse and unclasp the necklace. As the weight left her chest, she thought
back to what the pawn shop owner had said: “Oh
you don’t want that one, Miss, it’s cursed.
I don’t want blood on my hands… dirty money, as they say.” She had thought it was silly then, but as she
also felt her purse strap being removed from her shoulder, she wished she had
never wanted the damnable thing. The man looked into her dulling eyes one last time, then
spoke. “Good evening to you too, Miss.” He kissed her on her blood soaked lips, his
scruffy whiskers chafing her face, and then pulled the knife from her neck,
allowing her body to slump down against the wall. The last thing Jessica saw before everything
went black was the man walking away, the blood-soaked opal necklace dangling
from his hand. © 2016 Sarah J DhueAuthor's Note
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Added on May 12, 2016 Last Updated on May 12, 2016 Tags: Sarah J Dhue, Dhue, blog, Writer Wednesday, Wednesdays, Wednesday, Writer, writing, fiction, prompt, 35, superstition, cursed, opal, murder, pawn shop AuthorSarah J DhueIn the author's lair, ILAboutI am Sarah J Dhue. I am an author, as well as a photographer & graphic designer, currently going to school for web design. I've been writing since I was in elementary school. I live in Illinois. My f.. more..Writing
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