Writer's Wednesday #24: Unwelcome WitnessA Story by Sarah J DhueOn my blog, I do an 'event' called Writer Wednesdays. I post a prompt and others(including me) write something based on that prompt. It started when I heard the
shouting. Through the walls from down
the hall. Pete and Agatha. Always
fighting. But tonight sounded
different. More… frantic. I knew I should have kept my nose in my own
business, but curiosity got the better of me. I sneaked down the hall and pressed my eye up
to their keyhole, squinting my other one closed. They were screaming back and forth, but wait - what was Pete doing? Reaching behind the
tattered-looking recliner… “Holy s**t,” I said aloud, clapping
my hand over my mouth. For Pete had
pulled a small hatchet from behind the chair.
He gripped it in his hands like a baseball player up to bat. Agatha turned to face him and he swung,
catching her in the stomach. She tried
to cry out - but no sound came, the wind knocked out of her - as dark crimson
blood began to spurt out from around the hatchet’s blade. “You b*****d!” she finally managed
to snarl, pulling a small gun from her back pocket. “I wasn’t going to use this, but now-” Pete tried to swing at her again,
but she fired. Once. Twice.
Several times, emptying the gun into Pete’s torso and neck. He fell back onto the pale carpet, blood
spreading out around him, his body twitching as he went into shock. “F**k.” Agatha put her free hand to her stomach and
it away, now coated in blood. “I love
this sweater.” She disappeared into the kitchen and
I slid down the door, pressing my back against the wall, breathing hard. I tried to gain control, get up and go back
to my own apartment. The neighbors had
heard the gunshots no doubt and I didn’t want to be attached to this in any
way.
I found out later that Agatha had
fled the scene, she and Pete’s car gone as well. As I walked by the open door of their
apartment, I saw the janitor trying to clean the blood out of the carpet. I heard him mutter under his breath, “Same
old s**t.” To this day that sentence has
chilled me to my very core. © 2015 Sarah J Dhue |
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Added on October 7, 2015 Last Updated on October 7, 2015 Tags: Sarah J Dhue, writer Wednesday, writer, Wednesday, Wednesdays, murder, witness, 24, Dhue AuthorSarah J DhueIn the author's lair, ILAboutI am Sarah J Dhue. I am an author, as well as a photographer & graphic designer, currently going to school for web design. I've been writing since I was in elementary school. I live in Illinois. My f.. more..Writing
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