Writer Wednesday #11: Seventh SanctumA Story by Sarah J DhueOn my blog, I am doing a new 'event' called Writer Wednesdays. I post a prompt and others(including me) write something based on that prompt.Luke was not a bad man. He had been born with the sight; it was not
as if he had had a choice in the matter.
Many had called him a charlatan, a faker. Others had also called him an abomination,
unholy. There were few that felt he had
been truly blessed, that God had given him this gift for a reason. Poor Luke had recently
been the victim of some teenagers that lived in the apartment complex near his
own small house. Everyone in town knew
he had the sight, and would either treat him like a holy man, a liar, or the
Devil. Luke was certainly not the Devil,
but he was also no angel. After the
hoodlums took a baseball bat to his car, he decided to do something he had
never done before. To tell them their
future, only it would be a lie. He saw
it as a mean prank, but he was justified; it wasn’t as bad as him taking a bat
to their heads like they had done to his poor old Ford. Luke had shook his fist
at them as they ran off, shouting “Listen here, you little s***s! You’ll get what’s coming to you, and not from
me! I see only blood and death in your
futures!” They had actually looked
amongst themselves in a terrified manner, picking up the pace and running even
faster; Luke thought this was funny s**t. The sight was very
unpredictable. He actually saw nothing
of the boys’ futures, but he could tell you that the woman getting out her car
was about to get a promotion. When she
would enter her home to tell her husband the news, she would find him making
love to the young lady that worked at the Quik Trip. Life’s a b***h like that. But Luke could not be held responsible for
what happened next. He really had seen
nothing of the boys’ futures; he had told a flat out lie to scare them. A mere two days later,
the boys went to the amusement park a few towns over for some fun, and to carry
out a little bit of minor vandalism. The
amusement park was known for its fantastic roller coaster. So everyone was shocked when it derailed in
mid-loop, traveling about 80 miles per hour, crashing to the ground and killing
its only three passengers for that session: the three boys who had beat up Luke’s
car. The woman with the
promotion and cheating husband told authorities what she had heard Luke yelling
after the boys and he was of course brought in for questioning. Luke explained that it had been an empty
threat, to scare the boys. Many thought
this was downright cruel. Some thought
he had made the roller coaster derail, but the sight didn’t work like; he was
not telekinetic. After that day, Luke
stopped telling anyone what he saw.
Because he had not seen the tragic future ahead for the boys… Luke had never thought
his powers were either evil or divine.
He had always known they were unpredictable, but before that day he had
never known just how unpredictable. It
was then that he decided that maybe the Devil had played some hand in this
charade he called ‘the sight.’ © 2015 Sarah J DhueAuthor's Note
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Added on April 29, 2015 Last Updated on April 29, 2015 AuthorSarah J DhueIn the author's lair, ILAboutI am Sarah J Dhue. I am an author, as well as a photographer & graphic designer, currently going to school for web design. I've been writing since I was in elementary school. I live in Illinois. My f.. more..Writing
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