Driven
A Poem by
LSS
DRIVEN to Become
what I expect
Others want of me.
© 2008 LSS
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DRIVEN to Become
what I expect
Others want of me.
Sounds like something I would write. Nice Job. P.W.
Posted 15 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 more syllables and you'd have a haiku. you've written an interesting thought here. there is a lot left to say, tho your silence is eloquent. Z
Posted 15 Years Ago
3 more syllables and you'd have a haiku. you've written an interesting thought here. there is a lot left to say, tho your silence is eloquent. Z
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on December 10, 2008
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LSS Syracuse, NY
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Some time ago, I decided to write a humorous short story to give my wife on our 25th anniversary. The words and illustrations seemed to flow from my memory and imagination, about those early days w..
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