This is beautiful. The rhythm is superb and the flow is excellent. Mostly when I read poetry that wasn't written like a hundred years ago, I tend not to like it as much, but yours is definitely one of the few that I actually enjoy! Some people don't really care about meter or flow anymore, but this is truly a masterpiece. Good job.
I used to care about meter. Iambic and so on. But now, I've found more and more that poetry should never be an assignment, unless it's from the heart. Words are to meaningful to waste. And yours are way up there on my list of favorites. Your words make me envious of your ability. Honestly, it's like you've stolen some of my thoughts!
Oh wow, this is such a lofty, pretty little write. Makes one want to go kiss their beloved just to remember. :)
Nicely rhymed. It flowed so smoothly, I was at the end before I knew it. :)
This is such a beautiful interpretation of the kiss, so deep and emotional. I find that the rhyme has given it a mysterious touch. I bet anyone who reads this poem will connect with its meaning- I have for sure.
This was great! Best description of the emotion behind a kiss i have read yet.
I don't normally rhyme, i always feel it sounds silly, but this was amazing. i loved the rhyme scheme, it made the poem up beat and fun to read. keep it up.
Some time ago, I decided to write a humorous short story to give my wife on our 25th anniversary. The words and illustrations seemed to flow from my memory and imagination, about those early days w.. more..