It Doesn't Matter

Song I wrote in a few hours. Please review!

How can you expect me now

To leave myself behind

After all I've said and done

To hold on to my mind

Barely hanging as it is

To one last little thread

Never cared to climb the ladder

You put in my head

So many seeking sanctuary

From the shame inside

Only finding shallow lies

And dreams destined to die

What's so great about everybody else

That makes you need to stay

Even when you find that all they want 

Is a little more dirt to say

Whats so great about everybody else

And if you have to be this way

In the end no one is saved

By all the games they play

See the ones behind the wall

Screaming their apathy

Tell me how you can survive

Your lies are killing me

Is all the false acceptance

Really worth killing your soul?

Well stab it fast before that 

Pesky conscience takes control

What's so great about everybody else

That makes you need to stay

Even when you find that all they want 

Is a little more dirt to say

Whats so great about everybody else

And if you want to be this way

In the end no one is saved

By all the games they play

You say you have cast me out

But I'm leaving on my own

Nothing really matters 

When its best to be alone

Author's Note

Please criticize this. Not sure if I like it yet.

Reviews

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This is an awesome poem bro. It talk about how this person, your friend, lover, relative wants to be affiliate with these people who gossips and tell lies; and this person is willing to stab you (in this piece) in the back for it. Good poem bro.