Moment's Notice

One Night Feeling

And you haven't touched what's ruined me
Just lied down there, silently
Are you waiting?
Are you patient?
Careful?
I looked on through the burning glass
You built a room for me

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[R.E. Ray]

I see a damaged person, trapped in a tragic past, looking out, maybe reaching out, wanting an escape, a refuge, maybe just love. A thought provoking poem.