Black Ice Sky

Black Ice Sky

A Poem by schlanks

N i g h t  s k y  s e a s o n
Lines the paths that lead to you
And I, in admiration
Resign to watch the falling view

Untrampled starlight disregards me
Leading home only my dreams

© 2023 schlanks


Author's Note

schlanks
All feedback welcome. The first line is spaced out like that because I kept getting error 003 when I tried to publish it normally and I don't know why.

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A wonderful write here, well written

Posted 10 Months Ago


schlanks

10 Months Ago

Thank you I appreciate it
Sweetly cute, dreamily romantic

Good read

With love

Matthew

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

schlanks

11 Months Ago

Thank you!
life would be kind of meaningless without a dream, Enjoyed the read

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

schlanks

11 Months Ago

Thank you!
Dreams are building blocks of expectations. Great writing

Posted 11 Months Ago


schlanks

11 Months Ago

Thank you!

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Added on December 15, 2023
Last Updated on December 15, 2023
Tags: winter, snow, snowfall, stars, night, starlight, sky, dream, love, unrequited, pining, poem, poetry, short, lyrical

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schlanks
schlanks

NJ



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I'm here to write poetry, read poetry, and make friends. 29. NJ cat lover. New homeowner. Climber of Mario Kart 64 time trial rankings. Absolute yapper. I feel that a poem is successful when I feel.. more..

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