Apnea

A battle for presence

Opponent: a held breath

Holding me as they proceed

Incomplete

Yet unimpeded

Author's Note

All feedback welcome.

Reviews

[poetgurl]

I have sleep Apnea, this is written well.

[schlanks]

Thank you!

[June bug]

A nicely written write. enjoyable to read

[schlanks]

Thank you!

[June bug]

not a problem

[Arundass TP]

Nice writing. Enjoyed well

[schlanks]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!