The Silent Mind

The Silent Mind

A Poem by schlanks

What fell today upon me
When my reflexive reach
Found only myself caught within
A heavy swelling darkness which
With eyes could not be seen

The air beckoned for answer
I grasped not what had asked her
And upon attempt to action speech
Found naught where I could always breathe
Meaninglessness had end approaching faster

© 2023 schlanks


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Creative and well written, enjoyable read

Posted 8 Months Ago


schlanks

8 Months Ago

Thank you again
I can feel the pounding of a heart beat in this write. nicely written

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

schlanks

9 Months Ago

Thank you!

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Added on December 10, 2023
Last Updated on December 10, 2023
Tags: boredom, emptiness, uninspired, anxiety, fear, silence, poem, poetry

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schlanks
schlanks

NJ



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I'm here to write poetry, read poetry, and make friends. 29. NJ cat lover. New homeowner. Climber of Mario Kart 64 time trial rankings. Absolute yapper. I feel that a poem is successful when I feel.. more..

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A Poem by schlanks