High Tide

High Tide

A Poem by schlanks

We are water
A machine
And I, a working piece
Have been moved quite a ways
A telltale sign of waves

© 2023 schlanks


Author's Note

schlanks
All feedback welcome.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register



Reviews

I enjoyed your last line, This is really good.

Posted 11 Months Ago


schlanks

11 Months Ago

Thank you Meg
Kind of truthful in a way. enjoyed this write

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

schlanks

1 Year Ago

Thank you!

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe
Flag Flag Writing


Stats

96 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
 Added on December 10, 2023
Last Updated on December 10, 2023
Tags: water, waves, beach, summer, emotion, joy, short, poem, poetry, lyrical

Author

schlanks
schlanks

NJ



About
I'm here to write poetry, read poetry, and make friends. 29. NJ cat lover. New homeowner. Climber of Mario Kart 64 time trial rankings. Absolute yapper. I feel that a poem is successful when I feel.. more..

Writing
[more writing]

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Apnea Apnea

A Poem by schlanks