High Tide

High Tide

A Poem by schlanks

We are water
A machine
And I, a working piece
Have been moved quite a ways
A telltale sign of waves

© 2023 schlanks


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I enjoyed your last line, This is really good.

Posted 1 Year Ago


schlanks

1 Year Ago

Thank you Meg
Kind of truthful in a way. enjoyed this write

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

schlanks

1 Year Ago

Thank you!

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Added on December 10, 2023
Last Updated on December 10, 2023
Tags: water, waves, beach, summer, emotion, joy, short, poem, poetry, lyrical

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