High Tide

A Poem by schlanks

We are water

A machine

And I, a working piece

Have been moved quite a ways

A telltale sign of waves

© 2023 schlanks

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poetgurl

I enjoyed your last line, This is really good.

Posted 10 Months Ago

10 Months Ago

Thank you Meg

June bug

Kind of truthful in a way. enjoyed this write

Posted 11 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Months Ago

Thank you!

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Added on December 10, 2023
Last Updated on December 10, 2023
Tags: water, waves, beach, summer, emotion, joy, short, poem, poetry, lyrical

Author

schlanks

NJ

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I'm here to write poetry, read poetry, and make friends. 29. NJ cat lover. New homeowner. Climber of Mario Kart 64 time trial rankings. Absolute yapper. I feel that a poem is successful when I feel.. more..

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