Nothing Mattered

maybe you guys won't get it but I'll give it a shot.

The voices they chattered,

my mind it shattered,

my soul was battered,

my thoughts they scattered,

my wrists turned tattered,

my room turned blood-splattered,

but nothing mattered.

Author's Note

I'm curious to see if you'll understand

Reviews

[Katherine R.]

I think I get what you wrote here. I'm getting the idea of the victim's mind getting muddled from the schizophrenia and then they start cutting themselves and nothing seems to matter anymore to them.

Really well written, friend. Great job on this. You always have my tears.

[a schizophrenic writer]

thank you so much, and I'm glad you understood the message. I'm glad that you (or at least it seems like you do) enjoy a lot of my writings!

[Katherine R.]

I do enjoy your writing! Your welcome, I love reading stuff like this!

[a schizophrenic writer]

well i love writing it!

[Katherine R.]

That's good

[Chaz Hemsworth]

Really vivid. I see clearly a young man hunched over slashing his wrists crying in pain. Really hard to stomach, but I'm glad I read it.

[a schizophrenic writer]

yea most my writing is pretty dark :P

[cycy]

this is like really dark and suicidal, and i love the rhyme and the way you phrased it though tis pretty scarey and all.

[a schizophrenic writer]

Thank you for the review!