Without You

You turned around

and without a sound,

you went your own way

with nothing left to say.

Now you don't have a clue

of how I am without you.

And now I'm trying

but I'm dying

without you

Reviews

[Average person]

:3 just thought I'd say i love this. Can relate well. Great job.

[a schizophrenic writer]

thank you, im glad you enjoyed it!

[cycy]

this is really sad and emotional and i love the rhyme as well.

[a schizophrenic writer]

thanks for the review!

[Shaquana Adams]

I like the rhyme scheme. Very lovely and dark.

[a schizophrenic writer]

thank you!