Civil con Carnage

Elegy for the victims of the first ever carnage of the heralds of truth.

In a realm where weak souls dwell
Rules a clan of demons from hell
Greed for power creates plump usurpers
Forlorn tyrants makes perfect hellraisers.

Victims fell on their evil snare
Women and youth they didn't spare
Like ferocious beasts feasting on helpless preys
A carnage sprang from the fangs of the unhumane.

Defaced corpses left on mass grave
Like animals slaughtered by useless knaves
Organs torn with bullets and steel
The unborn exposed from the womb unsealed.

The kiths and kins together they wail
"Let the truth and justice prevail!"
For long silent years now it's a call
For the time of the wicked empire to fall.

Blame the ruler for being grave
Reproach the armies for being enslaved
Neglect all alliances and illicit affairs
And bring out the riegn that's true and fair.

Hear the howl of those tortured souls
Feel the breeze of the wrath that blows
Spill the blood of injustice flows
Through the veins of the savage foes.

Oh you demons, truly damned are your souls!
Heaven spits your names in flaming holes.
Visages of thy beloved, karma will reveal
To replace the faces of those you killed!

Fiends like you have no place for salvation
To deliver you from your own destruction.
As you made the path to dehumanization,
To hell with you to eternal damnation!

Author's Note

Don't hesitate to criticize. I won't eat you XD

Reviews

[Chaos_Collector]

I read your profile aaaaand you underestimate yourself. The diction in this piece is excellent. First stanza, first line, "creats." I think you meant creates. Anyway, I think you did a great job.

Chaos_ Collector

[Schemz]

Oh, thank you for pointing that out, and I'm glad you appreciate it :D

[Chaos_Collector]

You're welcome. :)

[Sheila Kline]

A very, very powerful write that is enough to make one fidget in their seat with the thought of evil as this, but the fact that you paint such a final picture for them is BRAVO!....they get what they deserve in the end!

I has hoping for an image though since art and visual images is so much a part of your profile description. As one who is very often inspired to write a piece solely from a picture, I hope to see some of the same from you??

Your writing is intriguing enough to cause me to come back to read more!

[Schemz]

Thank tou so much Maam :)

The truth is, i was so inspired to write this when a terrible massacre of journalists happened back in 2009. Unfortunately as of this time, appropriate justice was not yet claimed.

About the image, haven't done a piece from the poetry yet. But i would love to share with you some of my finished artworks if you like :)

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, I would be honored if you would be willing to share some of your finished artworks with me!! Please do!!!

[Schemz]

PM sent Maam. Hope you got it :)