you

you

A Poem by scattered mind
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have you ever felt butterflies flying around your stomach when you're around the one person you care for more than anything else? i have. what happens when you have to leave that person forthe time being? this is just how i feel around someone special.

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i always have good times

when i'm with you

nothing goes wrong

i  feel at home, content

 

never have to hide anything

i can tell you all of my secrets

assured they're safe with you

 

when the world is falling around me

you hold the pieces above my head

keeping me sane, no longer alone

 

butterflies fill my stomach each minute you're here

but when you leave my side

they fly away, leaving me once more alone and

empty...

© 2008 scattered mind


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I like the last two lines about the flight of the butterflies...they seem very personal. Now the question that I am pondering is this: who is the person that this is about? Definitely me. You should name this poem: TyTy.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully done

Posted 16 Years Ago


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