hippos

hippos

A Poem by scattered mind
"

the title doesn't matter that much...enjoy.

"

one...

running around big rocks,

two...

no one allowed to talk,

three...

climbing up cold trees,

four...

sliding in dead leaves,

five...

seconds left to go.

six...

falling on our tushes,

seven...

smashing into bushes,

eight...

slipping in the mud,

nine...

laughing, having fun.

ten....

now it's time to run!

 

 

© 2008 scattered mind


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I like the innocence , but also the depth of emotion this piece carries. Really creative

Posted 16 Years Ago


I enjoy the childlike optimism of this one...it is my fave that i have read of yours. It has a simplicity and yet a hint at a deeper meaning...nicely woven.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Cute! It sounds like a childern's book!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on September 2, 2008
Last Updated on September 4, 2008

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WORD OF THE DAY: friends sometimes life is hard... but there's nothing you can do about it so all there is left to do is live and have the most fun you can lean on friends and be there for them.. more..

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