Earth explodes every Eden else Eve evolves

O terrible angel.
My shining lady demigod upon your hapa throne.
Pity me this kiss, this love.
See how your eyes choreograph my own pupilic dance,
justify their efforts.

 

Reward them with the soft, supple decadence of you.
Hereby I am no long mine.
But let me be the pill you swallow when the sky darkens.
The red eye killer.
Your escape from your mothers half of the family.

 

Little did you know while you sleep,
that while you swallowed that jagged pill;
and the razors cut your silver linings.
Your diabetic tongue.

 

True were my claims of sweet dreams;
woven by the sons of Hypnos on my dime.
Forgive my perfidy and remember me upon your ascension
as the lone steadfast soul of your teaching.
The curator to your history, the future.
My acts of regicide shan't be in vain,
just a taint on the marble floor.

Reviews

[Anima Inspired]

Once again...brilliant. There is a depth to this piece that is simply impossible to grasp without multiple reads. I love the imagery, the wordplay, and your masterful word choice...I really have very little to say because I'm so impressed...wow...

[Jason Henry]

(sigh...) this poem is too good dude...i mean "diabetic tongue" i literally jumped up and ran. no lie! the whole stanza probably contributed to the me making an a*s of myself in private. nevertheless, my comedic but true reactions aside, en exceptional read and write as you always deliver.