Bruised

It hurts.

 

It's over, it's gone and I don't see

Any reason to think of you and me

Still I cannot understand why

When I look at you, I'm screaming inside

 

I spent so many sleepless nights

Trying to get you off my mind

I don't want to feel this way no more

I just want you walking out of my door

 

So don't even try to look me in the eye

Don't even act like everything's alright

Don't even dare to love me again

'Cause when you came into my life,

I've been bruised since then.

 

Written: 03/13/04

Reviews

[Rc R. Vagilidad]

"I don't want to feel this way no more "--- better if you end it this way (without affecting the rhyme):

...this way anymore...

hmmmm...i know who you're referring too...i like this ayn!!! in such a way that i knew who's this for.... and for the fact it's not as trite as the title can give... but you gave it with a nice interpretation's for what you really had felt....

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The end of ends...
the hardest drop...
is all too complicated...
yet the end is the end...
I did a take on the first and the last...
to get a better feel of your writings...