Forbidden Sky

Memoirs of the flightless angel.

 

I lie on my field of dreams

Watching the black heavens

Where Diana smiles at me mockingly

 

I envy the stars that laugh forever      

They encircle the dome from whence I came

 

It's as if I am desperately trying to reach

The sky from which I was forbidden

Since the day I gave up my wings

For an earthly love

 

 

Written: October 6, 2006 @ 09:37 pm

© Maxinne Marie

 

 

Reviews

[Jofer Serapio]

wrong spelling of featured... Nagmamadali eh. Ejeje.

[Jofer Serapio]

Woah! Astig tlaga si MaxXx!!! Congrats on being feutured!

[Gar Avoch]

I read this just ten seconds ago.
No. It's great, sounds like your wings are still there, just folded down.
Full moon over here in Aus. too at the moment.

[Cristal Bridges]

Two words to describe this poem... Breathtaking and lovely!!!! This is writing at its finest!

[Daniella Rose Walker]

Stunning poem...
Brief yet so profound.
Intensity at its finest!

~Daniella

[Rc R. Vagilidad]

Naks, maxinne !! featured poem ba!!!!

inspired gid abi mong....

di ko ra kaya nga mood...

Congrats...

[!FireCracker!]

I love it, I really can't even put into words how or why, but it's beautiful and i love it!

[Anonymous]

So much feeling in so few, but powerful, words.
I wonder, did we all have wings once?

[LadyLincoln]

I like this one very much - most especially the last two lines. Just perfect!

[Tabitha Kaufman]

I really loved the creativity in this one.