You Are Beautiful

Short poem about someone.

You Are Beautiful

You are delightful,

               charming,

               alluring,

                               beautiful.

A real knockout, some

Some would say

But I know

And you know

That you’re beautiful.

We also know

That The Naked Lady

Is no match for you, dear.

You were my favourite song,

                                smile,

                                laugh,

                                          tear.

But you already knew that.

You are beautiful. 

As pretty as a petal

No, no. You’re the whole f*****g flower.

A crocus flower.

Always ready to, by definition

Cause respiratory failure, problems to the central nervous system and in some cases even cause

Death.

Author's Note

My first proper & now published poem so any feedback welcome.

Reviews

[matrixmark]

Not normally a reviewer of poems. But i am starting to dip my toes further into the water. So i thought this was a great piece, with much depth to the expressions which have been used.

Good piece.

Mark.