Justified Pessimism

You tell me what you think.

I really hate the feeling
When you can't sleep
You stare at the ceiling
No use counting sheep

Still sad but you're dealing
Big fish in the pond
You better start reeling

Looked at the hook
No fish, no bait, no luck
But you went by the book
Wanna go but you're stuck

Do you still keep thinking
Where it all went wrong
The beach is sinking
Was it a trap all along

Reviews

[Gee]

Reminds me of my not so well behaved days when I would string women along just to have my wicked way with them( then once done the next sought) I’d imagine some would’ve acted out your words, no doubt cursing me.
All of the above said, I now very much regret how I was back then especially as I now have a20 year old daughter of my own.
Enjoyed the read

[RebeccaRose]

Thank you so much for the feedback. And yeah. Luckily I have a son. And luckily he's 16 years from being a legal adult. So I'm not too worried about women ruining his life just yet haha.

[MoriartyMesa]

There is something behind this writing i am almost sure I can figure out, but i think there are details i may have missed.

[RebeccaRose]

Basically. My hopes. The things I've loved. Things and people I believed I deserved and earned. I have lost. I have been fucked over in so many ways it's comical. Ironic truly. I miss being hopeful. And having a glimmer in my eyes. When my son was taken from me. That's when reality hit me like eating a tree with a Porsche. Was it all a trap I asked myself.

[Haley]

This is a great read and I resonate in those spirals of thoughts. Luckily I've found very strong sleeping pills that help the thoughts at least until morning! Good job.

[RebeccaRose]

I am very flattered. Thank you so much.