Fallen

The heavenly bounds of Gods Kingdom

and a pit of Inferno surrounding the gates of Hell;

A thin line of boundary which separates these two worlds

Is where two dissimilar beings met.

If an Angel and a Devil were to fall in love with one another,

can their love transcend the law of heaven and hell?

This is fate’s decree:

Love can’t change what aren’t meant to be.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

This would be a bad place for the lovers. Purgatory is in the center. Can Angel and Devil survive in place without end or beginning? A very nice poem. I love the book Dante inferno. Myth and tale. A good place to find peace. Thank you Scarlet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Joeydevinci]

Bravo this is very well written, I've always been found of poetry that contains the elements of Heaven and Hell. I must say the morose array lurking form the shadows of this poem does seem very hopeless though, I do wish you remember hope is an entity that embodies a symbolism of your state of mind. If you are always happy then you are always hopeful, your enemies will fear this, and friends will bask in your enjoyment.

[V]

Sad one with a tad of hopelessness. Particularly the last line implies this gloomy state. When it comes to love I think I am too optimistic to agree entirely with this write though that might be naïve in a way.
Anyways, a well-written piece of poetry.

[Scarlet M.]

Thank you for the review! I just felt like ending it in a tragic way would put more emotion in the poem. Nonetheless, I would only need to change one word to make the ending a happy one. "Love 'can' change what aren't meant to be" is another way to look at it. :)

[V]

You're right. A little tragic reads also well so it's up to you what you want it to be. I'd enjoy both ways.