naked

I was exposed.

Everyone saw my weakness, 

I just wanted to cry and say everything that happened,

how the strong, happy, impenetrable girl changed,

how I'm not the same.

I'm sorry friends, but I just can't go back, I can't smile and pretend

everything is fine, because is not. 

I can't lie and ignore my past, my wounds, my sorrows, 

my pain.

The one is on my chest bleeding for all of what I've done, 

but most of all for how I feel, 

because

I've lost it all.

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

When we are this raw and exposed, naked is a great word to use. This is a short poem that packs a punch in each line.

[Just A Passion For Writ..]

Excellent choice of words to describe such harrowing emotions

[Annie S]

Your title shows a powerful sense of the emotion that the poem
was already going to have. I love how you expressed your feelings with the simple words
giving the reader an imagery in their mind
Keep writing :)