List of 12 Poem

Y'know

Suggestion is like mind control.

I say “cracking knuckles”

it is hard to resist at all

Your will will buckle

It is a disease of the mind

the Fact you are now aware

Subconscious action of all kinds

unlike Before, you now must Care

like Breathing or Yawning or Blinking

planting Suggestion into your brain,

And now to do these involves Thinking

I say secrets, and shatter the innocence

That you feign.

Reviews

[keaton Steele]

i like how you used the word "will" twice in a row, creates an awesome sound!

[Mason Althouse]

this poem is honestly bars. straight fire. honestly though this poem is very well done and the rhyme scheme adds a lot and makes this poem a lot more professional and flows a lot better. really good job buddy.

[avery]

im a fan of the words but not the big ones those are difficult to pronounce