A Gift Unnoticed

When I started writing this poem, I thought about everything that's around me. Of the one thing that can either be a gift or a living hell, depending on the person. Do you know that gift that is given to everyone? Such a gift that's right in front of you.

A Gift Unnoticed

So much is blessed upon all.
The precious gift that gave all so much,
And from this gift alone has given so many questions.

Not all will notice such gift that has been given.
Only some will have the heart to hear that gift.
Those who do not hear it may be in pain
Or give pain to the gift they have been given.
A gift that is getting destroys by many.

There are those who want to save it,
Many who don’t do anything about it,
And there are people who are lost in what the gift is.

The gift is for all, but many may never notice this gift,
Until it’s too late to fix what has been caused by all,
A gift that will then vanish and give no more.


Written on November 17, 2005

Edit: February 28, 2009

 

Author's Note

Tell me what I need to improve or if there are any error in my writing.

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

A very beautiful piece of writing it is!
Very well written!

[Butterflymom]

I enjoyed this piece...very well expressed! Great write.

[Sarah]

this sentence doesnt make sense to me..."A gift that is getting destroys by many".
I don't see anything that I can tell you to fix except that I don't really like the rhythm, because there really isnt one. But that's all.