loss

The day you passed away,
my tears froze inside.
Complete disbelief,
nobody to justify.
This life of deceit,
a small pond of compromise.
Wild flowers surround you in your peaceful abode,
memories of your eyes calm my soul.

Craig Morris

Reviews

[A]

So sad. Very easy for me to relate to this. The loss of someone is the worst thing that could happen to a person. Great poem! :)

[Kerri Maniscalco]

I really enjoyed this piece, truly wonderful.

[Wunderlich]

Wonderful flow. This is an excellent piece.