Love

Its an expression about love

Love

The perpetual art of your imagination;

Draws the stunning pictures of your

Graceful beauty ,that reflects upon

 The river like  diamond rays.

With your dazzling beauty; clouds walk slowly

And faster to drizzle over the rainbows that 

Scribe those rare colors of your fair love

Which restores the visions of my life.

In the arms of your open love,

All the empires have vanished;

Like a sand from my gentle hand

Though I promise, I will stand.

Author's Note

Its about love and passion for someone which doesn't exists therefore I labelled it as an excitement and imagination.

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

this is a beautiful lush write. It sparkles and breathes, very magical indeed

[Lilly]

How beautiful - lovely imagery throughout this!

[Blue]

You painted strong metaphors and imagery appropriate for the topic. Well-written!

[Ruth]

Superb, beautifully woven, you have mastered a wonderful piece of art :) x

[Pryde Foltz]

A really expressive and eloquent write, Sayed. Really great job.

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

Thank you so much Pryde ..... Much appreciated

[Lyn Anderson]

A vivid imagination, this love. A compelling and passionate write, with great form.

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

Thank you so much for your review.

[Avinash]

Well the poem gives a definite visual imagery of dream land of love and passion. Where the poet is trying to win over a lover who is not reciprocating a true promise of love.

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

Spot on Avinash..............God bless you.