when your gone

i dont know why i wrote this but i did

when your gone i feel my heart stop,i feel like im withering away.

i can feel my tears rolling down my rosy red cheeks when your gone

everything i see reminds me of you and what used to be.

everytime our song came on i just started to cry and wonder why.

and everytime i hear the wind howling i hear you sayin my name and i love you.

when your gone my life stopped dead in its tracks, my heart shattered and i fell to peices.

everyone tries to make me smile by saying that ill see you soon and ill beable to hug you.

ill never forget you and not let my memory of you never fade away into the darkness of death.

when your gonei loose all my self and become a person of sadness and silence.when your gone i cant even remember a day with out you.when your gone the peices of my heart are missing you.when your gone.....

Reviews

[Michael Kerr]

i like this poem. i can feel your feelings, and i can relate. well done, a great piece, keep writing. -mike kerr-