There

There

A Poem by Darcy

How many of you

have been there

just hanging in there

with no one there

to be there

for you.

 

What happened to when you

were always there

for them and there

for their friends, being there

to be a shoulder to cry on, there

is where you were, there

not here, was you

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Darcy


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interesting concept and idea for this poem....each and every line flowing perfectly till the very end : )

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very interesting idea for a poem. I like the way this poem flows. It's also got a very 'real' feeling to it, because just about everyone can relate to really wanting to have someone there for them and then not getting it. Also, I think a lot of people can relate to what seems to be going on in the bottom stanza (at least my take on what's happening), when they feel as though they have started to slip away from their friends and that they are not doing such a good job of being there when others need them.

In all, very good work and interesting idea! Keep it up.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on November 25, 2008

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Darcy
Darcy

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I'm 14 year old girl, and I would like comments on how to make my work better, I write a lot of poems because they come easiest, they flow from me randomly, sometimes I don't even know what they mean more..

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