Mirror

Mirror

A Poem by Darcy

Looking in the mirror

it would appear

that my eyes have reflections

these are detections

of a past life

black pupils piercing like a knife

against the blue-gray of my eyes

they tell the truth otherwise

they would not be

meeting eye to eye with me

in my rejection

of a reflection

© 2008 Darcy


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Amazing what each person sees in a mirror, nice write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


the last 2 lines are great, enjoyed the read good work

Posted 16 Years Ago


Mirrors are great inspiration for great literature, such as your poem you have here. I confess - I've stared into my own eyes in the bathroom mirror as well. Isn't it wonderful how overcome by emotion you can become? It's no wonder our eyes have been the central theme of so much literature...

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on November 22, 2008

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Darcy
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I'm 14 year old girl, and I would like comments on how to make my work better, I write a lot of poems because they come easiest, they flow from me randomly, sometimes I don't even know what they mean more..

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