All the Same

All the Same

A Poem by Darcy
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like the song one and the same thing by audioslave, they are all one and the same thing

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The stars twinkle

The snow shines

Like millions of diamonds

Like countless pieces of glass

 

The lake reflects

The mirror copies

Like another clone

Like well made puppet

 

The polotics debate

The lawyers argue

Like a few kindergarteners

Like a 6th grade quarrel

© 2008 Darcy


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This piece is fantastic, the ending brought the concept full circle.
Perfect as it should, pure imagery and insight, a poem to sweep the reader away, keep it up. Well Done! PW


Posted 16 Years Ago


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Ian
Wow, I really liked this one.
The best lines are:

The lake reflects
The mirror copies
Like another clone
Like well made puppet

I liked the way you related them,
it's really good.

Keep adding stuff! ;)



Posted 16 Years Ago


i like this poem. witty & sarcastic, a little sad. i love the imagery in the 1st stanza and the intelligence in the others. it is all the same, in the cycle of life. well written.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on October 25, 2008

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I'm 14 year old girl, and I would like comments on how to make my work better, I write a lot of poems because they come easiest, they flow from me randomly, sometimes I don't even know what they mean more..

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