Pointless

Sad

Pointless

 

So you curl up

you give up

 

So you stop smiling

you stop caring

 

So you lost the battle

you lost the war

 

So you start crying

you start shaking

 

So you lose all hope

you lose you sanity

 

So you realize this is pointless

you realize its meaningless

 

So you simply stop

 

Everything

 

 

Reviews

[Dalaina Renee]

Well expressed poem. I could feel the thoughts and emotions. Good job!